Three PR Blunders That Just Shouldn’t Be Made
august, 2007 | art and copy: John Siebenthaler
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Publicity vs Public Relations
Each of these covers contains an editorial mention or feature for one of our clients. Combined circulation’s just shy of 1 million readers — that’s a lot of impressions.

Multi-Page Feature Packs Impact
Editorial features are always a prized result of a successful public relations project, like this Bike Works placement for Enkay Polishing.
Spin Off Publicity Keeps On Giving
Motorcycle Product News invited our client’s participation on Warn Winch build for the ’07 Indy show. We produced a (2) reprint that coincided with (1) the magazine’s cover date for even more punch. As the sXs tours events around the country (3) consumer media is featuring the build in all it’s logo’d splendor.
The Web Changes Everything When it comes to distributing product info or special event publicity, today’s dealers and manufacturers have to contend with multiple titles serving multiple audiences in multiple markets. Hitting the bullseye isn’t the slam dunk it once was, even though more and more publications are actively soliciting user-generated content.
Knowing that not every publicity release requires the skill and capability of a Chicago pr shop, there are a couple of basics that, if followed, should improve the chances of a successful — meaning an article that not only gets printed but read — submission for publication.
I could easily do a Top 20 list, but any well prepared release is built on a foundation of just a few key concepts. Keeping in mind that your editor’s job isn’t rewriting your material but considering it for inclusion, here’s my Top 3 list of must do directives.
1) Copy Who’s writing your material? Too many self-generated releases go out with an unnaturally stiff formality that makes for deadly non-readership. Professionals know the best tip is to lighten up a ton and write in a normal conversational style. An informal style usually conveys more credibility and just plain friendliness than a weighty monument to Edwardian English, and that can make a big difference when it comes to credibility and retention.
The typical product release might see 30 words published. A good approach might be to provide four times that, broken up into bite size paragraphs that an editor can easily use. Description. Benefit. Pricing. Availability. Short bursts of targeted info work best.
Write Naturally Try to write like you talk. (If your linguistic skills are challenged, definitely hire a pro.) A natural writing style is easier on the reader’s brain and a lot more likely to attract favorable attention from the editorial department.
Lead with a strong headline. Without one your product will limp along with all the rest of the shipwreck survivors. Be first off the island with a head that jumps off the page, garnering you the attention you crave.
Be ruthless with your editing. It helps to visualize those Academy Award recipients for Best 15-minute Industrial Documentary as they begin their shout outs with a remembrance of their third grade art teacher. As you imagine the orchestra beginning to drown out their droning, use your red marker liberally and often.
2) Art & Illustration What about art? Including professional illustration and photography is money in the bank. Sending out a release without eye candy cuts your chances for positive exposure. A well crafted chunk of art can carry a so-so release, but forget the visuals and you’ve just handicapped a successful placement.
Use an ftp site or web link to move the files. Trying to cram a 20-meg file through the e-mail pipeline is a disaster. Ftp transfers are smooth, quick, efficient, don’t clog up the editor’s in-box and provide a convenient route for assistant editors and art directors to follow for their own needs. You can also link to art stored on a web page for essentially the same result.
3) The Web Connection Connect the dots! Make sure that new widget has an appropriately prominent position on your web site. Don’t send out publicity and forget to provide a way for your audience to follow up online. More info — and here you can get as creative as you want with supporting tech tables, PDFs crammed with more art, newsletter signups, etc. — is always welcomed by readers curious enough to light up your URL.
These are just a few of the many steps that go into imaging, creating and distributing a successful release. Whether it’s a full on public relations campaign or the latest sequential product release, all the elements have to mesh for publicity to be effective, while half-measures can have a negative impact on not only your product but your brand’s reputation and credibility. You can view more communication tips in our columns archives.




